Q. maana woh ik khawaab tha dhhoka nazar ka thauss bewafa se rabt magar umar bhar ka tha\khushbu ki chand mast lakeereN ubhhaar karlauTa udhhar hawa ka woh jhhoNka, jidhhar ka tha\nikla woh baar baar ghaTaaoN ki oT seuss se muamla to faqat ik nazar ka tha\tum muskra rahe the to shab saath saath thiaansu gire the jis pe woh daaman sahar ka tha\ham aaj bhi khud apne hi saaye meN ghhir gayesar meN hamaare, aaj bhi sauda safar ka tha\saHra ke sar ki maaNG hai ab tak woh ik lakeerhaasil jise gharoor meri rahguzar ka tha
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A. Its hard when u are trying to read Hindi written in English.Probably thats why Shyam c did not unerstand your beautiful poem.
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